login2222's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gaming days Short 2]

Finally!

it's about time we get something original instead of the tired bullshit we always get lol (ur welcome :D) also, that login2222 is really good! i dunno about that yoshiking tho... but wow login is so amazing :3 lol

Yoshiking2 responds:

You bastard Yoshiking was just as good

[Generic RPG Ep. 1]

you my friend have got a subscriber 8D

i loved it... can't wait for part two!! it's funny, exciting, suspenseful, and makes me think that you have potential!! Loved the original sprites... sonic would've been to boring and unoriginal, so you made a good choice listening to those people 8D. 1 thing i ask of you though, when and if you make part 2, please try to watch your spelling, and maybe make a neater dialogue box. the invisible thing is ok, but maybe if you created a different box, you would get more views and a higher rating... hell, you may even get front page!! So, in conclusion.

Good:
Story, Sprites

Needs improvement:
Text, Spelling

Bad:
Nothing to me

p.s. maybe you could have the characters show a little bit of remorse for their friend dying? i mean.. she just died and they're like.. "ok, and?"... just saying! good job with you're story, and i hope you continue making it!

spootman1 responds:

I just finished episode 2 yesterday.

just wait till episode 2

and I'll make a movie where there's clips that I forgot to put in at the time.
Is that alright with you?